【高频ESSAY】晚交作业是否应该扣分? 行文思路分享 及 高分范文。

2019年01月25日 7PLUS英语


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首先,大家需要知道的是,PTE的写作部分作答时间为20分,在时间内,大家需要好好审题,理清思路,并想好适当的点及例子来支持自己的点。如果我能把大部分高频题目都理一遍思路并想好适当的表达。我候遇似的便会游刃有余。

 

以下是篇写作的目:

 

Some universities deduct students’ work if assignment is given late. What is your opinion and suggest some alternative actions?

 

遇到,我需要首先分析得是什么


往往一些同学因没有好哈审题便直接开始写作,可能会致所非所答,文章逻辑不清。这类同学,一定要提高审题能力,如果需要可以将目翻译为中文,方便理解。

 

的翻如下:

 

学校扣交作学生的分,你的点和建?

 

首先大家一定要认识到,一共有两


第一个问题问你的观点是什么。

第二个问题问有什么其他的方法来处理这样的事件。

 

因此,在第一个body段,我们需要讲出自己的观点,并罗列出论据来解释说明自己的观点。而在第二个body段中则需要提出你的建议。

 

进入主题段。下面我们给大家提供一些写作思路。


Agree

Bring responsibility and punctuality among students to keep the 

work ready within the time frame. Otherwise,if universities don’t bring strict norms, causal attitudes might hamper students’ future.

Disagree

·   Reducing marks creates an discrimination among students. R: sometimes the assignments or task given by the faculty may not be understandable to the foreign students.

·   Deduction of marks is not the best solution. R: Lecturers should sit with students and ask them the problems or concerns that they are facing in submitting task.

·   Deflated grades and distort the students’achievement.

Solutions

·   Teachers must guide students for the timely completion of their respective work & take regular updates until the due date.

·  Help weak students as a mentor to correct their study loopholes. 

·   University must extend the time if anyone has a solid reason.

·   Schools and teachers can separate marks into “approach to learning” and “summative” strands.

·   Involve students’parents and send those students to study hall


结合上面的思路,我们选取几条观点,配合模板,成文即可。


下面我们给出一篇这个题目的范文:

As the world integrates, how to assess students has become a prevalent topic for fierce debate. Yet at the same time, various issues have arisen, aserious one of which is should universities deduct students’ work if assignmentis given late. In my opinion, I think universities should not do that and some alternative actions should be applied.

 

Admittedly, penalties due to late submission lead to deflated grades and distort the students’ achievement. More specifically, no curriculum guide has “handing in work on time” as a learning intention, so students should be graded on the quality of their work ratherthan how punctual the assignment is. Thus, if students’ grades are reduced due to late submission, the grades will not reflect the student’s ability to meet the intended learning outcomes of the course they are enrolled in. Hence, it isa not wise choice to deduct students’ work if their assignments are given late.

 

Due to this fact, some actions are needed. Firstly, schools and teachers can separate marks into “approach to learning” and “summative” strands which means that students can get penalized in their “approaches to learning” mark,but not their summative mark. Moreover, for those students who are habitually late on a number of assignments, education institutions can involve students’parents and send those students to study hall to help the students to realize their problems and have a better performance in the future. By doing these,both students’ academic achievement and their positive attitudes can be guaranteed.

 

In conclusion, deducting students’ mark due to late submission is not the best choice for all universities. If professors and schools want toregulate those students’ behaviors, they can separate students’ final grades into two different parts and cooperate with parents and study hall.


以上便是目的一篇范文。同学型的候一定要多写,多。因想出的点不一定都能写出来,遇到表达困候需要多相关料,多与老与同学交流,找出最适合自己的观点。


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