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2014125亚太地区作文考题

Think carefully about the issue presentedin the following excerpt and the assignment below.

 

Some see printed books as dusty remnantsfrom the preelectronic age. They point out that electronic books, or e-books,cost less to produce than printed books and that producing them has a muchsmaller impact on natural resources such as trees. Yet why should printed booksbe considered obsolete or outdated just because there is something cheaper andmore modern? With books, as with many other things, just because a new versionhas its merits doesn’t mean that the older version should be eliminated.

 

Assignment: Should we hold on to the old when innovations are available, or shouldwe simply move forward? Plan and write an essay in which you develop yourpoint of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examplestaken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

 

【破题】

先迅速扫描assignment,如果不是很理解题目的侧重点,再回去看excerpt,从中找到破题思路。从assignment中我们抓出关键词hold on to the old以及innovations,由此可见此次考题属于SAT常考类话题:创新与守旧类。此类话题已屡见不鲜,平时上课讲解和练习此类话题已经不少。之前考过类似的题目:

Should originality always be more highly praised than conformity?(201010)

Does progress depend on people with new ideas rather than on peoplewhose ideas are based on the current way of doing things?(200505)

创新和守旧类话题有很多不同的考法,换句话说,虽然同属创新类话题,但很多的题目的考查的侧重点是不一样的,这让考题越来越灵活,这也是亚太考区很多考生喜欢照搬例子分数不高很重要的原因。比如,有太多关于创新的题目:

Is it necessary for people to imitate others before they can become originaland creative? (201301)

Do people place too much value on newness? (201310)

Is imitation of others always harmful? (201311)

Do all people need to be creative?(201210)

If people worked less, would they be more creative and activeduring their free time?(201105)

Is it absolutely necessary for people to study the creative arts?(201005)

Is it always better to be original than to imitate or use theideas of others?(200801)

Can people ever be truly original?(200710)

Is creativity needed more than ever in the worldtoday?(200503)

 

虽都在讲创新,但考生必须要注意题目中的侧重点不同。考生在使用自己准备的例子时一定不能简单的默写,而是要根据题目侧重点的变化调整自己的例子深入恰当点题,体现自己的critical thinking,否则很容造成偏题。我们知道得零分有很多种方法,偏题是最常见的一种。

比如此题中,考生给出的例子要突出innovation,但选择hold on tothe old ones还是simply move forward,这是不跑题很重要的一点。

 

【备考】

SAT作文与TOEFL作文不一样,前者侧重思维类考试,后者侧重语言类考试。也就说SAT作文要学会讲道理,你讲到道理越深刻越有道理,分数相应的就越高,其实就是我们常说的论点、论据和论证三者之间的关系。

SAT作文要求考生在25分钟内写出400字以上的作文,平时练习过的学生都知道,这是一个巨大的挑战,不管是脑力上还是体力上。临场发挥几乎不可能,必须提前准备好,作文都是平时写好的。那应该如何去准备SAT作文呢?

考生总希望出现相同的题目,其实一字不差或一模一样的作文题目几乎不会出现,但是同类话题会重复出现,这就让我们备考有了很强的针对性。

《周易》曰:天行健,君子以自强不息。地势坤,君子以厚德载物。来自百度百科的解释:天(即自然)的运动刚强劲健,相应于此,君子处世,应像天一样,自我力求进步,刚毅坚卓,发愤图强,永不停息;大地的气势厚实和顺,君子应增厚美德,容载万物。这就产生了SAT三类常考话题:

人与自我的关系,创新、独立思考、自主选择、目标、坚持等,此乃自强不息;

人与他人(物)的关系,包括人与他人、人与集体(人与社会、人与国家)、人与科技、人与艺术、人与信息、人与流行文化等,此乃厚德载物;

人与自然的关系,发现自然、保护自然、欣赏自然等,才乃天人合一;

所以,考生在备考时就要针对以上话题准好自己的例子然后背熟,上考场针对题目的变化灵活地默写自己的例子。关于准备例子提醒各位考生两点:第一,以人为主,这个人的经历越复杂、越坎坷越好,能够体现人与自我、人与他人或人与自然的关系;第二,准备的例子能够解决大多数题目就好,大家要侧重练习常规类话题,对于一些少见或比较偏的题目不是练习的重点。具体如何操作,欢迎大家来新东方学习。

最后要和所有考生强调的是:所有的技巧建立在实力之上,阅读使人丰富,写作使人精准,多读多写才是王道,增强自己的实力才是王道。我上课经常和学生讲功夫熊猫一结尾时那只可爱的熊猫说的那句台词:There is nosecret ingredient. It's just you.(世界上根本没有什么秘方,只有你自己。)


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