2015.3.21 A类大作文范文

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aids organizations draw the attentions to problems.Others think celebrities make the problems less important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Throughout the world, many organisations and individuals put in great effort give aid to disadvantaged people. While celebrities can help bring attention to charitable causes, others have argued that such advocacy can pull attention away from the real issue. Personally, I think charitable organisations need to use celebrity campaigns to their advantage, despite risks of potential backlash.

(Introduction段落，paraphrase是不可少的。看完Introduction，就很清晰明了的明白作者想要表达的观点—这便是Introduction的作用之一。)

On one hand, celebrity involvement might mislead people into thinking the issue is already being addressed. When famous people get involved, global issues and the efforts to address them, can attract the general public's attention. Seeing that type of celebrity involvement may create a mentality that someone else will handle it, meaning ordinary people may not feel a responsibility or obligation to help out. For instance, it is common for professional athletes to set up sports camps for disadvantaged children, with the 'NBA Cares' program being a prime example, but seeing such high-level athletes involved makes me question what, if anything, I could contribute.

(类似于celebrity involvement 和create a mentality 这类词组可能平时我们很难想到，但是如果做好摘抄工作，日积月累，终有一天，这些词组会从你脑中蹦出来，笔下生辉。)

Regardless, celebrities can greatly increase the spread of awareness on an issue. Given that famous people often have the ability to share their views with millions of people across the globe, important issues can certainly gain support through celebrity advocacy. Most people have heard of the ‘ice bucket challenge’, where many celebrities helped to spread awareness on fighting ALS through posting videos of people dumping ice water over themselves.

(这段讨论的是作者的第二个观点。由于题目要求是discuss both views，那文章中如果没有提到两个观点，那么TR的分数就会变得很难看。此段中还用前段时间风靡全球的 “冰桶挑战”作为support，证明了名人的效应是很强大的。)

Personally, the potential benefits are well worth the risk associated with celebrity promotion. Advertising companies will often take on celebrity endorsements for marketing purposes; organisations that provide aid should be no different.Those non-profit organisations can drop sponsors in light of a scandal, just like how companies voided sponsorship agreements with Tiger Woods in the aftermath of his scandal.

(另起一段，完成文章中的另一部分要求：give your opinion.至此，文章题目discuss both views and give your opinion才算完成。)

In conclusion, I think charitable organizations need to use every effort to raise resources they can, which includes celebrity advocacy, knowing full well that the actions of a famous spokesman could very well cause harm.

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