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2014年08月11日 墨尔本资讯台


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Should visitors follow local customs?

As the material standards of living and traveltransportation have undergone tremendous development over the past severaldecades, correspondingly, we have witnessed steady growth in the tourismindustry. With more foreign visitors appearing at tourist destinations, theissue of whether native traditions should be followed has raised substantialpublic attention.

Some local residents, especially those who find foreign cultures intriguing, claim that they will gladly embrace cultural differences for many reasons. To begin with, while travelers are mesmerized bythe local culture, members of the host country can broaden their horizons by observing such newcomers. Not only will this allow local residents to learn more aboutthe world at large, but it will also reinvigorate domestic residents’ passionfor adventures and encourage them to travel overseas. At the same time, by demonstrating cultural compatibility, most visitors will feel more comfortable during their stays. This in turn will polish the host country’s global imageand consequently boost the local tourism industry. Moreover, welcoming cultural differences is essentially demonstrating a superior level of understanding andacceptance of visitors’ identities, which will, in the long run, significantly aid the elimination of racial discrimination and xenophobia on our planet.

However, while foreigners are welcome in most countries, conservatives argue that it is mutually beneficial for visitors tofollows local customs. In many cultures, a certain set of rules must bestrictly followed to show respect. By behaving in the same way as local do, visitors can avoid offending others unknowingly, which may potentially prevent the occurrence of any undesirable conflicts. In addition, learning about indigenous customs isalso an effective way of maximizing tourists’ travel experience. Many culturelovers who visit aboriginal villages find attending spiritual ceremonies anengaging and unforgettable memory.

In conclusion, how foreign visitors should behave vastly depends on the local residents’ attitude towards cultural differences.In relatively tolerant countries, visitors are always welcome whereas incountries that operate under rigid cultural codes, foreign visitors should try to assimilate with local community in order to show respect and enhance their experience.

我的雅思经验:略读一百篇文章,也不如熟读研究一篇文章。把你觉得写得好的句式和词组圈下来,然后自己熟背这些句式和词组。我考雅思的时候,作文总是6分或6.5分(从来上不了7),然后用这个方法坚持每天透彻理解一篇高分文章,坚持了不到2周去考试,写作直接7+。你可以试一试,我把这个方法推荐给我的朋友,坚持做的人基本上都过7了。如果要打印版的,请在公共平台上留下邮箱。


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