正常的汉语写作流程是提纲(确定写作内容,逻辑安排),正文(语言表达),修改(完善全文),经过这几个步骤,可以说所有考试类作文应该都可以应对。当然英文写作的流程同样重要,其中提纲的部分是最被中国考生忽略的。为此我们根据剑桥雅思考官满分范文的结构分析,得出discuss类型写作结构,按照“老外”的逻辑来展开写作,保证思维方式的地道性和文章逻辑结构的合理性。
根据剑8T1书后范文整理如下:
discuss双边讨论+个人观点陈述
开头段——倒三角(题目关键词2个以上,并按照概念的范畴从大到小的顺序排布)
主体1:
(1)什么是…——概念解释
(2)为什么是…——原因
(3)…是什么/怎么样——举例
主体2:
(1) 承上启下
(2) 什么是…——概念解释
(3) 为什么是…——原因
(4) …是什么/怎么样——举例
结论段:
(1) 同意某1观点
(2) 2者都有道理
(3) 2者都不同意
按照以上的写作逻辑结构,整理如下范文(只提供汉语,重在体会写作逻辑安排):
题目:Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
开头段:(倒三角——future career/studying in a college or university/through work experience)
在当今这个竞争激烈的社会中,大多数人选择在大学或者学院中提升自己的能力,但是光是具备理论知识对于未来就业准备还是远远不够的。
主体1:(什么是,为什么,怎么样)
大学是提升学术水平最适合的地方。它可以给学生提供一个非常丰富的专业知识的数据库,而且提供了相对比较适合学习的场所,有图书馆,实验室以及学术交流平台等等,这些都促进大学生培养良好的学术基础,从而相对容易地找到相关专业的工作。
主体2:(承上启下,为什么,怎么样)
但是在工作中,经验也是不可或缺的一部分,所以有些人选择尽早结束他们的学习从而参加到工作当中,给未来的工作留下最坚实的铺垫。理论脱离实际就会失去意义,只有一定的工作经验,能让大学生更深刻更灵活地掌握和应用知识,进而更容易适应未来实践性比较强的工作。
结论段:(2者都有道理)
总之,对于想要获得体面工作的学生来说,学术能力和实践经验同样重要。而且它们是相辅相成、缺一不可的。
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Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
希望以上内容能给奋战的烤鸭们一条清晰的练习之路。
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