题目:
Some people point that experientiallearning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education.However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best. Do you thinkexperiential learning is beneficial in high schools or colleges?
解析:
这篇作文题目直接给出了两个观点,第一个就是Some people point that experiential learning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formaleducation而第二个反面观点就是However, others think atraditional form of teaching is the best. 最后题目问我们,你认为体验式学习到底在高中和大学是否是有益的。这篇作文有一点要注意,题目很明确问的是在学校里面是否适用,所以千万要写学校里面的这种学习方式,而不要天马行空的写到学校外面的学习。
对于观点,不用非要提到experiential learning比traditional form的好,可以就直接说experiential learning是好的,或者说experiential learning是不好的。请注意,不要说tradition form of teaching是好的还是不好的,这一题的重点是experiential learning。
这里提供几个体验式学习的优缺点给大家参考:
优点 | 缺点 |
Harvest practical skills | Time-consuming |
Avoid remembering knowledge by rote | Opposite to the exam-oriented education system |
Increase competitiveness in job hunting | Difficult to assess students’ performances |
就写法来说,建议还是四段式的写法。
第一段
首先,题目给的这两种观点建议大家paraphrase一下直接写进第一段,然后引出自己的观点,第一段就可以结束。
第一段建议大家5分钟之内一定要写完。例如:
第一句,描述现象
It iswidely accepted that different learning strategies result in different learningoutcomes.
第二句,正面观点+反面观点
Somepeople point that experiential learning works well in formal education system,whereas opponents argue that a traditional form of teaching is the bestapproach in classrooms.
第三句,自己观点
Personallyspeaking, I contend that the approach of experiential learning can be appliedtohigh schools orcolleges when used wisely, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
第二段
Essay第二段开始说第一个优点或缺点以证明你自己的论点是正确的。一句连一句,一环扣一环,逻辑清晰。大家要清楚,PTE机器是能够判断出句子间的逻辑关系的,所以还是要重视。第二段写法例如:
第一句:表明第一点优点
To begin with, experiential learninghelps students to harvest practical skills.
第二句/第三句:解释第一点优点
This is rather obvious because students have to practice a lotto finish a certain task. In formal learning settings, especially in colleges,students are expected to be able to apply theoretical knowledge to real life.
最后一句:举例子
For example, my university professorsoften require us to come up with curriculum designs that one day can be used inour teaching practices.
第三段
Essay第三段模仿第二段,讲述第二个优点,这里就不赘述了。最后一段结尾一定要点题,并且提到你的两个论点。一两句话即可。例如:
第一句:总结两个观点
With allpoints above, the conclusion can be made that experiential learning can workwell in high schools or colleges because it helps students to harvest practicalskills and avoid remembering by rote.
第二句:generalisation呼吁大家支持你的观点
In this regard, itis imperative for governments to encourage more experiential learning atschools or colleges.
最后,希望看到的同学能够受用!
7PLUS PTE课程 EARLY BIRD大优惠
早鸟报名最高可省200刀
选好开课时间
↓
提前对应天数报名
↓
享受寒假优惠
↓
届时来上课
就是这么简单。。。
想了解课程安排
快来联系小7报名吧!
微信:sevenplus_ielts
或长按下方的二维码