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题目:The consequences of conflict can have more impact

than conflict itself.

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 Minor conflicts can sometimes lead to tragic consequences

(主题句). If a conflict is not resolved in time, it can often

swell or escalate, which then makes the consequences so

much more impacting (解释主题句). In the film “A

Separation”, the accident of Razieh’s miscarriage leads to a

series of chain reactions, including lawsuits and possible

imprisonment of Nader (例子1). The failure to reveal the

truth at the early stage of the conflict eventually impacts

many people, and results in violence, pain, and economic

loss on many parties (例子1的分析). This story is parallel

to many real-life examples in our society (过渡). Road

rage, for example, is a typical phenomenon that may incur

tragic consequences when a conflict is dealt with in the

wrong way. In Chengdu, China, a female driver was beaten

severely and hospitalized after an argument with another

driver on the road. Eventually, the female driver had to

receive multiple surgeries, and the other driver was

imprisoned (例子2). Again, the influences of the incident

is far more significant than the conflict itself (例子2分析).

Therefore, if we do not eliminate conflict or minimize the

impact of it, the consequences may become out of control

(勾回prompt).

 Some conflicts may have far-reaching consequences, even

after the conflicts end.

 Yet, some conflicts are more about the differences in

values, rather than the consequences.


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