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不论是发送还是回复邮件,注重礼貌的人都有一定的套语可循。写好邮件对于学业、事业都很重要。比如申请学校,请教指点,社交联络和工作来往等等。下面给大家介绍一些起草电子邮件的基本要素。
Tips for writing a good email
Write a clear subject title.
写清楚主题:
'Christmas dinner'
'Coursework deadline'
'Team meeting changed to Room 303”
Follow polite terms of address.
尊称对方:
Dear Professor Smith
Dear Dr Wang
For family and friends you could use 'Hi'.
如果是家人或熟悉的朋友,可以说:
Hi mum and dad
Hi Jessica
Never use smileysor texts in formal communication.
千万不要在正式邮件里使用表情符或发短信缩略拼写
Wrong: Hi Professor Smith, ur lectures rG8J
Introduce yourself clearly
清楚地自我介绍:
My name is Tim Morris, Peter Morris's father. My son has asked me to write to you about…
I am a freelance photographer with 10 years' experience at the BBC. I have learned from my friend Tony that you are doing a big China project, for which you might need an experienced photographer.
My name is Kitty Su, the programme leader for Business management. I would like the team to have a meeting next Monday before teaching starts. Could you please let me know if you will be available in the afternoon?
What is your message? Keep it focused.
你要说什么事?重点要集中:
I am writing regarding the outstanding balance of...
There are two questions I'd like to ask you regarding the trip. How much will it cost and where are we staying?
Have a clear call to action and set deadlines
说明你要收件人做什么,什么期限完成:
Dear all,
I am asking you to complete the module handbook by next Friday as this is required by the Business department.
Respond in a timely manner even if you can't provide the answer yet.
及时回复,即便你还不能回答对方的提问,也要告知对方你已经收到邮件:
Thanks for your letter. As one of the managers in charge is away we have not been able to come to a decision yet regarding your part-time working request. We will let you know as soon as possible.
Proofread if you can.如果可能一定检查校对。
实例 1:
Subject: Shortlist
Dear Mr Roberts,
I am pleased to say that we have shortlisted you for the vacancy in our Employability Team, and our HR department will be in touch to arrange a time. The days I have set aside for the interviews are 7th Nov PM, 8th Nov PM and 9th Nov all day.
I thought I would let you know before the weekend as it has been a little while since the closing date and HR will be in touch next week.
Kind regards,
Tony Leader
Director of Student Services
实例 2:
Dear Mr Leader,
Thanks for your email. I am delighted to hear that I have been shortlisted for interview.
I can do any of the morning sessions but I will wait till HR contacts me to discuss the specific time allocation for my interview.
I'm really looking forward to meeting you.
Kind regards,
Alex Roberts
实例 3:Out of office reply
不在办公室的自动回复
I am out of the office until Wednesday 2nd September 2015. For
urgent matters, please contact Mrs Anita Bell at
[email protected]. I will respond to all other matters on
my return.
Kind regards
Mrs Denise Spice
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