2018年的第一场考试
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今天
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2018.01.06 Academic Task 2 Sample Essay
Q: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in team sports such as football, while others think that taking part in individual sports such as tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Alternative views exist on what type of sports are more beneficial. Some individuals, including me, consider partaking in team sports such as football as more advantageous, whereas others consider partaking in individual sports such as tennis or swimming as better.
•Vocabulary•
partake in:
partake: 参加,参与
partake in: 分享,参与,参加
e.g.: The trouble is that although the managers partake in the upside, they share none of the downside.
whereas:
然而,鉴于,反之, used to say that although is true of one thing, it is not true of another.
e.g.: Special tax rules are not reviewed regularly whereas agency budgets are subject to annual review.
On the one hand, participating in individual sports such as tennis or swimming can be helpful for a person to gain personality traits that foster independence. In other words, individual sports allow one to gain self-reliance and confidence. For instance, swimming athletes practice the sport habitually on their own without depending on others, making them acquire autonomy and self-assurance with which they are able to focus on themselves exclusively and gain attentiveness to detail regarding their performance and fitness which could extend to other aspects of their personal lives.
•Vocabulary•
trait:
n. (性格中的) 特性,品质
e.g.: Belk found that the most obsessive collectors had one overwhelming trait in common: loneliness.
foster:
Vt. 培养,养育,培养
e.g.: This, in turn, will foster innovation and growth in a host of new industries.
self-reliance:
n. 自力更生,依靠自己
e.g.: By promoting self-reliance, we help people move away from dependence on food aid and other forms of assistance.
habitually:
adv. 习惯地,日常地
e.g.: Trust is the very first thing to go when leaders habitually lead via crisis.
autonomy:
n. 自治,自治权, freedom that a place or an organization has to govern or control itself.
e.g. The key to preserving the dignity and autonomy of the patient is informed consent.
attentiveness:
n. 注意力,专注
e.g.: For one thing, problems with attentiveness and hyperactivity fall along a continuum.
On the other hand, team sports are extremely beneficial as they impart crucial personal skills such as teamwork and cooperation. When a person plays some sport alongside other individuals, it enables him to gain exposure to group dynamics allowing him to communicate, strategize and collaborate with others. For example, in football, eleven diverse people work in a team to win a match requiring them to understand, respect and support one another, and making each team member realise the importance of team spirit and partnership. Overall, team sports enhance one’s ability to work in a group effectively and amiably, which is a necessary skill in today’s world.
•Vocabulary•
impart:
Vt. 给予,赋予
e.g.: Bank supervisors can impart only so much common sense to those who think they know best.
alongside:
(与…) 一起,在旁边,靠在…旁边
e.g.: Charles spent a week working alongside the miners.
strategize:
Vt. 为…制定战略
e.g.: Sometimes, it is more interesting to play games where you have time to think and strategize or where the goal is to cooperate with each other to win the game.
partnership:
n. (两个人,或者组织国家间的) 合伙关系,伙伴关系
e.g.: Several youth charities have formed a partnership to help these homeless teenagers.
amiably:
adv. 亲切地,和蔼可亲地
e.g.: If a person is too loyal, does not understand amiably, will repel other people.
In conclusion, while some people opine that playing individual sports is better as it enhances independence, others, including me, view playing team sports as more beneficial as it harnesses cohesion and team spirit which are quintessential attributes in modern society.
•Vocabulary•
harness:
Vt. 治理,利用,控制
e.g.: We can harness the power of the wind to generate electricity.
quintessential:
adj. 精髓的,典范的
e.g.: Its growth is the quintessential emergent process, characterized by uncertainty and punctuated by discontinuity.
其实这篇文章写的比较“中规中矩”
结构和表达比较 “标准”
好处就是
非常适合同学们模仿、学习
只要fully address the topic
然后有正确的逻辑+结构
用词追求准确而且难词大词
语法亦是如此
写作得高分
其实就是这么一回事!