2016.07.30 A类Task 2 范文

Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?

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There is growing discussion that the gap between the wealthy and the impoverished is growing increasingly, with the rich becoming more well-off and leaving the poor with even less. This issue has resulted in increased social problems like political unrest, and the best way forward is to have more stringent taxation rules.

A wide income gap is problematic in society as it fosters social concerns that can result in political unease. From health-related diseases like obesity to increased crime rates, these matters have been especially prevalent in developing countries today. For instance, income inequality in Malaysia has resulted in the growing number of homeless people due to unaffordable housing, increased health issues due to rising costs of food and health care, which have in turn resulted in political tension and violent riots between the rich and the poor in the recent years. Hence, wealth concentration is a strong cause for social problems.

The best ways to narrow income gaps are to reinforce progressive taxation. By being more stringent with taxing people according their income, governments are able to allocate taxed funds to invest in helping those who are less-fortunate whether in terms of education, healthy or employment opportunities. For example, Centrelink which is a government program in Australia delivers a range of government payments to the unemployed, students, and disabled people which should be emulated in other countries. In turn, this may help foster the economy in the long term to bring economic and social gain not only to the poor, but also to the rich.

In conclusion, the points above have discussed a wide spectrum of social problems that can be caused by income gaps. It is up to governments to allocate proper funding in tax money to help the narrow this gap.

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