雅思写作中常见10类连接词错误

连接词是雅思写作评分中至关重要的一项参考标准，它不仅直接影响着Cohesion and coherence这一项分数，还间接影响了我们grammar的得分。今天小雅哥将为各位童鞋们介绍中国学生最常用也是最常错的10个连接词和表达，希望童鞋们能在雅思作文中避免此类错误的出现哦~

雅思表达常见错误1

On the other hand一般引导对比的东西，不等于besides, furthermore, secondly

错误例子：Many young people enjoy online shopping. On the one hand, it saves time. On the other hand, it saves money.

评讲：save time和save money 是两个并列的有点，没有对比的关系，在这里童鞋们最好用firstly和 secondly来表示这一并列关系~

雅思表达常见错误2

把On the contrary误以为是In contrast的替换词

错误例子：The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortality rate dropped.

评讲：on the contrary 一般出现的语境是前面出现否定信息。这个词组基本上不用于雅思作文。这里烤鸭们要注意哦~

雅思表达常见错误3

把While, whereas误认为是in contrast的替换词

错误例子：The birth rate rose. While the infant mortality rate dropped.

评讲：while 是从属连词，要连接两个独立的句子，这里应该是“,while”或者改成“In contrast,”，烤鸭们，你们也有中招吗？

雅思表达常见错误4

Besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, in addition被误认为是“递进”的连接词

错误例子：Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, they can gain qualifications in foreign universities.

评讲：besides一般引导两个并列的观点，不指代因果关系，这里用“because of this”会比较合理。

雅思表达常见错误5

However常常被误认为是on the other hand的同义词

错误例子：Working from home has benefited many people. However, it can cause problems.

评讲：however一般是转折关系，也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立场。而On the other hand一般是并列关系，也就是前后句子或者观点没有轻重之分，是并列的，一般是两个事情的对比，而不是转折。

雅思表达常见错误6

By doing this, in this way被误认为是as a result, therefore, as a consequence 等

错误例子：Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poor health.

评讲：一般by doing this, in this way都是用在人们有计划地做某个事情，最后为了达到一定目的，或者效果。那么，显然不可能后面出现不好的结果，譬如说poor health。所以小雅哥在这里建议童鞋们用As a result最好。

雅思表达常见错误7

As a result, therefore, thus, as a consequence 都是连接词，而不是连词

错误例子：Many people today prefer to use mobile phones to communicate with their friends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.

评讲：as a result类似于副词，没有连词的功能，所以前面要用句号或者;号~

雅思表达常见错误8

Thereby 不是therefore的替换词

错误例子：Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can do research online.

评讲：thereby的习惯用法是thereby+doing something,这个规则是不可以违反的，千万不要以为thereby用了就比therefore高大上哦

雅思表达常见错误9

In order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某个事情，要注意逻辑主语，而且一般不会用否定

错误例子：Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.

评讲：烤鸭们有没有觉得这个句子用否定读起来很不通顺。Governments should cut down on the spending on the arts, in order to save money.才是正确的用法。

雅思表达常见错误10

with如果加名词，往往是表示“有了…”，后面一般不加负面的东西

错误例子：With pollution, many people will have health problems.

评讲：pollution是不好的东西，用with很怪异，用because of会好一点。