写好雅思写作的最后一步,不要前功尽弃!

2017年03月14日 无忧小雅哥


雅思大作文

结尾段的写作方法

大作文的introduction写得很漂亮,那必然也要有一个精彩的结尾。虽然雅思作文的分数并不是取决于结尾段落,但是一个漂亮而干脆的结尾段还是会对Task Response的分数产生影响,尽可能的把大作文的分数拉高!


因素一: 直直接接回答问题


Question: when a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


Sample Conclusion: 

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means “pointless”, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.


这个结尾段明确提出了自己的观点,不是所有的俄科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。


注意:不要添加新的信息,结尾段只要总结文章中的观点并且回答题目中的问题即可。

因素二: 只需要2-3句话即可


Question: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise it’s waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?


Sample Conclusion: 


Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.


仅仅2句话,作文的态度很明确。学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否则就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。


注意:一般在结尾段,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解到文章已经进入尾声了。

信号词有:

Finally

To sum up

In conclusion

In brief

Overall


这里要提醒一下大家:最好不要用in a word这个词组,除非你真的打算用一个字来总结…



信号句型有:

It can be concluded that…

We can find that…

I think it is also important to remember that…

The main point is to make sure that…

I believe that

Personally, I think that…

I would say that…

My view is …

 

其实conclusion中可以用到的表达和词组远不止这些,但是大家只要能够熟练运用以上这些就足够了,毕竟这些并不会给你的分数带来太大的影响哦!最重要的,还是你的写作内容本身。

雅思写作并没有大家想象中的难,只要掌握了方法,你会发现搞定雅思真的不是一个大坎!


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