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Academic Task 2 Sample Essay

Anyone with phones can answer calls for both social and personal purposes at any time. Do you think this brings more benefits or drawbacks to both society and individuals?


Phones are an essential commodityin today’s modern world. These devices allow people to answer calls for any social or personal reason at any moment, which I believe provides more advantages than disadvantages to the society and its people.


Firstly, the greatest advantage of phones and its use of taking calls is that these provide a means to satisfy the basic human need of interaction with others. This allows people to stay connected with friends and family members across borders and continents. For example, students who enrol in study abroad programs can communicate with their parents and friends regularly with audio as well as video calls, and thus stay in constant touch, minimising their homesickness. Moreover, individuals are able to respond to emergency situations immediately with the help of phone calls and stay close to the people they care about during dire circumstances. Consequently, all individuals are able to stay interconnected with one another further resulting in a close-knit society. 


However, there may be some certain limitations related to this situation. The ease and convenience that phones allow in answering calls whenever creates some degree of distance among people, especially strangers. Increasing number of people are constantly involved with calls on their phones and do not indulge in conversations with the people around them. For instance, youngsters nowadays are always on the phone talking to their friends and do not participate in conversing within a social group outside of their friend circle, which may result in the younger generation to become anti-social. 


In conclusion, I opine that this new era of phones and their function of making and taking calls for diverse social and personal reasons anytime comprises more benefits than downsides to both society and individuals as these build a more unified community.


[Key Vocabulary]


  • commodity:

n. 商品,货物,日用品

e.g.: There is an abundance of commodity supplies on the markets.


  • at any moment:

随时,任何时候

相近的词组:

for a moment: 片刻,一会儿

in a moment: 立即,立刻


  • constant:

adj. 持续不断的,经常发生的

e.g.: He kept in constant contact with this family while he was in Australia. 


  • stay in touch:

固定短语,保持联系

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  • homesickness:

n. 乡愁

e.g.: That homesickness is a spontaneous emotion also means both adults and children will feel its effects.


  • dire:

adj. 可怕的,悲惨的。极端的

e.g.: The country is in dire need of food aid.


  • a close-knit society:

adj. 紧密的,严谨的,紧密团结在一起的

e.g.: Not alone but as part of family, of something larger yet even more close-knit.

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  • indulge in:

Vt. 沉溺于

e.g.: He indulges in reminiscences of his youth.


  • friend circle:

可以直译成“朋友圈”

e.g.: This is a perfect way for one to manage the friend circle and get rid of some of the noise in your social graph.


  • unified:

adj. 统一的,一致的

e.g.: There is no better time to have a strong unified team than amidst chaos.


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