雅思写作题目 IELTS Writing Topic
In education and employment, some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
IELTS Writing
题目分析:
题目背景是:(1个背景)
In education and employment, some people work harder than others.
在教育和工作中,有些人比别人更加努力。
题目问题一:(1/2个问题)
Why do some people work harder?
为什么有些人会更努力?
题目问题二:(2/2个问题)
It is always a good thing to work hard?
更加努力是一件好事吗?
题目当中包含:1个背景,2个问题。
开头段的任务,就是把这“1个背景,2个问题”用2句话表达出来。
范文精华解析
开头段
It is true that some people are hard-working and diligent while others prefer not to push themselves, and there could be various reasons for these different attitudes. In my view, a positive work ethic is desirable up to a point, but too much hard work can be counterproductive and even unhealthy.
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第一句话:
It is true that some people are hard-working and diligent while others prefer not to push themselves, and there could be various reasons for these different attitudes.
逐字逐句精华解析:
基础句子(一)
People are hard-working and diligent.
人们勤劳勤奋。
词解析:
hard-working 努力工作的,勤奋的
working with a lot of effort
diligent 勤奋的,勤勉的
someone who is diligent works hard and is careful and thorough
类似单词同时出现:
(雅思写作和口语中,知道单词数量多、并会恰当使用的体现)
hard-working and diligent
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句解析:
谓语动词是:are
(谓语动词有且只有一个)
(1) People are hard-working.
主语 people,谓语 are,宾语 hard-working
people 名词,are 动词,hard-working 形容词
一个“主+谓+宾”,即可称为一个句子
(2) People are diligent.
主语 people,谓语 are,宾语 diligent
people 名词,are 动词,diligent 形容词
我们对比下句子(1) 和 (2),找到相同和不同的成分。
相同成分:
句子 (1) 和 (2) 当中,都有“people are”。也就是,句子 (1) 和 (2) 当中,主语 people 和谓语 are 这2个成分是相同的。
不同成分:
句子 (1) 中的宾语 hard-working 和句子 (2) 中的宾语 diligent。
合并句子(1) 和(2),相同的部分省略,不同的部分用 and 连接。
(1) People are hard-working.
(2) People are diligent.
句子(1) + (2)
People are hard-working and diligent.
基础句子(二)
People prefer not to push themselves.
有些人不喜欢强迫自己。
词解析:
prefer:更喜欢
to like someone or something more than someone or something else, so that you would choose it if you could
例句example:
• I became a teacher because I preferred books and people to politics. 我成为了一名教师是因为我更喜欢书籍和人而不是政治。
push:鼓励;敦促;逼迫
to encourage or force someone to do something or to work hard
例句example:
• Encourage your kids to try new things, but try not to push them too hard. 要鼓励你的孩子们尝试新鲜事物,不过尽量不要逼得太紧。
push themselves 逼自己做什么事
句解析:
谓语动词是:prefer
(谓语动词有且只有一个)
People prefer not to push themselves.
主语 people,谓语prefer,宾语not to push themselves
prefer to do,更喜欢做什么事
prefer not to do,表达“更不喜欢”的时候,“不”用 not,不去做,就是not to do
基础句子(三)
There are various reasons.
有各种原因。
词解析:
词搭配
various reasons 各种原因
(搭配 collocation,是英语当中很重要的一个概念。搭配里的单词,是固定的,不能改的。这个概念在雅思考试和国外大学英文写作当中尤其重要。在写作时,使用了自己随意组合的搭配,而不是已经存在的搭配,会在考试和大学英文作业当中被扣分,是英文水平低的表现。)
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句解析:
谓语动词是:are (谓语动词有且只有一个)
There are various reasons.
主语 There,谓语are,宾语various reasons
various adj.形容词,reasons n.名词