雅思写作范文精华 - 不能错过的“逐字逐句”精华解析

2018年02月27日 澳洲世纪方舟留学




雅思写作题目 IELTS Writing Topic


In education and employment, some people work harder than others. 

Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

IELTS Writing


 

题目分析:


题目背景是:(1个背景)

In education and employment, some people work harder than others.

在教育和工作中,有些人比别人更加努力。


题目问题一:(1/2个问题)

Why do some people work harder?

为什么有些人会更努力?


题目问题二:(2/2个问题)

It is always a good thing to work hard?

更加努力是一件好事吗?


题目当中包含:1个背景,2个问题。


开头段的任务,就是把这“1个背景,2个问题”用2句话表达出来。




范文精华解析





开头段

It is true that some people are hard-working and diligent while others prefer not to push themselves, and there could be various reasons for these different attitudes. In my view, a positive work ethic is desirable up to a point, but too much hard work can be counterproductive and even unhealthy.

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第一句话:

It is true that some people are hard-working and diligent while others prefer not to push themselves, and there could be various reasons for these different attitudes. 

逐字逐句精华解析:



基础句子(一)

People are hard-working and diligent.

人们勤劳勤奋。

词解析:

hard-working 努力工作的,勤奋的

working with a lot of effort

 

diligent 勤奋的,勤勉的

someone who is diligent works hard and is careful and thorough

 

类似单词同时出现:

(雅思写作和口语中,知道单词数量多、并会恰当使用的体现)

hard-working and diligent

 


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句解析:

谓语动词是:are 

(谓语动词有且只有一个)

(1) People are hard-working.

主语 people,谓语 are,宾语 hard-working

people 名词,are 动词,hard-working 形容词

一个“主+谓+宾”,即可称为一个句子

         


(2) People are diligent.

主语 people,谓语 are,宾语 diligent

people 名词,are 动词,diligent 形容词

 

我们对比下句子(1) 和 (2),找到相同和不同的成分。

相同成分:

句子 (1) 和 (2) 当中,都有“people are”。也就是,句子 (1) 和 (2) 当中,主语 people 和谓语 are 这2个成分是相同的。

不同成分:

句子 (1) 中的宾语 hard-working 和句子 (2) 中的宾语 diligent。

合并句子(1) 和(2),相同的部分省略,不同的部分用 and 连接。

 

(1) People are hard-working.

(2) People are diligent.


句子(1) + (2)


People are hard-working and diligent.




基础句子(二)

People prefer not to push themselves.

有些人不喜欢强迫自己。



词解析:

prefer:更喜欢

to like someone or something more than someone or something else, so that you would choose it if you could

例句example:

•  I became a teacher because I preferred books and people to politics. 我成为了一名教师是因为我更喜欢书籍和人而不是政治。

 

push:鼓励;敦促;逼迫

to encourage or force someone to do something or to work hard

例句example:

•  Encourage your kids to try new things, but try not to push them too hard. 要鼓励你的孩子们尝试新鲜事物,不过尽量不要逼得太紧。

push themselves 逼自己做什么事

 

句解析:

谓语动词是:prefer 

(谓语动词有且只有一个)

People prefer not to push themselves.

主语 people,谓语prefer,宾语not to push themselves

 

prefer to do,更喜欢做什么事

prefer not to do,表达“更不喜欢”的时候,“不”用 not,不去做,就是not to do




基础句子(三)

There are various reasons.

有各种原因。


词解析:

词搭配

various reasons 各种原因

(搭配 collocation,是英语当中很重要的一个概念。搭配里的单词,是固定的,不能改的。这个概念在雅思考试和国外大学英文写作当中尤其重要。在写作时,使用了自己随意组合的搭配,而不是已经存在的搭配,会在考试和大学英文作业当中被扣分,是英文水平低的表现。)

 

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句解析:

谓语动词是:are (谓语动词有且只有一个)

There are various reasons.

主语 There,谓语are,宾语various reasons

various adj.形容词,reasons n.名词








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