1． 题型分析-----题目类别；考情总结+预测

2． 话题分析------核心词

3．思路拓展------结构：4段/5段

1. 题型分析

1.1 报告类：原因+措施

notes：注意cause词性，避免跑题

eg：

1. Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems will be caused? And what are the solutions? 2015.4.11 A 类

2. In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

1.2

考情分析：

官方：2015 4月30 A类作文与澳洲不同；反押题：2015年上半年4次：2，4 和5月----充分准备，夯实基础

官方指导：剑8test3 污染拥堵 混合 第二问

剑10 test1 儿童惩罚措施 混合 -第二问

本篇的完整性和唯一性

2. 话题分析：社会话题—大众健康类

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

核心词-----题意

在一些国家，大众平均体重不断增加而健康水平持续下滑。

相关话题：

提升公共健康：Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 剑9test3

烟草：

Some people think smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011.08.13)

政府与公共健康：Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2014.7.19

快餐 fast food

3. 思路拓展—逻辑性

推荐结构：4段

首段

二段：分析原因

三段：给出方案

总结

二段原因段：

不合理饮食：fast food（原因论证cheap, convenient/举例论证Burger King）；

不健康的生活方式：缺乏锻炼（举例论证）；

遗传性肥胖/营养过剩：

话题语料库-----话题词汇/替换词汇：

Unhealthy diet-(fat, sugar, calorie)-----rely on fast food or pre-prepared meals

Sedentary lifestyle ----physical exercise---adults：tend to walk less and do more desk jobs

children: play video games rather than doing outdoor sports

Genetic obesity/inherited obesity;

Skeleton

过渡句： Several related reasons are responsible for the trend that populations in industrialised countries are increasingly overweight.

分论点1 One explanation would be that…..

分论点2 ….is another major cause of ……

分论点3 Besides

三段措施：

政府：颁布相关的法律，监督快餐行业----增加公共体育设施；

个人：改变饮食结构：多吃蔬菜，水果；素食-----尤其父母注意儿童饮食；多多参加体育锻炼；

媒体：宣传---提升公民意识；/ 促进医学发展---解决遗传肥胖问题

话题语料库

establish related regulations；increase the number of sports facilities for the public

lead a healthy diet； vegetarian；do regular exercise；

Mass media---promote the public awareness / money and resources –effective measure to solve

过渡句：There are several actions that can be taken to mitigate the problems described above.

措施1 Firstly, a simple solution would be for governments to

措施2 While for individuals,

措施3 Mass media also should paly a positive role in…..