烤鸭们~在电子邮件频繁使用的现在,无论是申请学校咨询问题还是工作中与老板、同事交换信息,都要用到电子邮件。不同于随意的memo和过于正式的书信,电子邮件有自身的特点和比较固定的一些话术。G类烤鸭可以借鉴一些用法用在书信写作里哟~
【开头】
[中性]: 开门见山地提出这封邮件的目的,较为Formal。
• I am writing to confirm/ enquire/inform you…
我写信是要确认/询问/通知您…
• With reference to our telephone conversation today…
关于我们今天在电话中的谈话…
• In my previous email on [date]…
先前在【日期】所写的信中…
• In reply to your email dated [date], we decided…
回答你【日期】写的邮件,我们决定…
• This is in response to your email today.
这是针对你今早来信的回复。
[好消息]:
• We agree with you on…
我们同意你在…
• I am delighted to tell you that…
我很高兴地告诉你…
• Congratulation on your…
恭喜您关于…
[坏消息]:
• We are sorry to inform you that…
我们很抱歉地通知您…
• I’m afraid I have some bad news.
我恐怕要带来一些坏消息。
• It would be difficult for us to accept…
我们很难接受…
• Unfortunately I have to say that, since receiving your enquiries on the subject, our view has not changed.
很不幸地,自从收到您的咨询后,我们的决定并没有改变。
要求收信人的相应行动]:
• We would be grateful if you could…
我们会很感激如果你可以…
• Could you please send us…?
可否请您寄给我们…
• Your prompt attention to this matter will be appreciated.
如果您能立即注意此事,我们将非常感激。
• I would really appreciated meeting up if you can spare the time. Please let me know what suits you best.
如果您能抽出时间,我希望能与您见面,请让我知道你最合适的时间。
• Please give us your preliminary thoughts about this.
请让我知道你对于这件事情初步的想法。
• I would appreciate it very much if you would send me your reply by [date].
如果能在【日期】前收到您的答复,我将非常感激。
[提出邮件内容的主题]:
• As mentioned before, we deem…
如前所述,我们认为…
• As a follow-up to our phone conversation yesterday, I wanted to get back to you about the pending issues of our agreement.
就我们昨天在电话中所谈,我想答复您合约中一些待解决的议题。
• I am pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to join workshop scheduled for [date].
我很高兴地通知你,你已经被同意参加【日期】的研讨会。
[附件]:
• I'm enclosing…
我附上…
• Please find enclosed…
请查阅附件。
• Attached hereto…
附件是关于…
• Attached please find the most up-to-date information on/regarding/concerning…
附上关于某某的最新资料…
• Attached please find the draft product plan for your review and comment.
附上产品计划书的草稿,请审查及评价。
[再次感谢收件人的帮助]:
• Your understanding and cooperation is greatly/highly appreciated.
很感激你的理解及合作。
• Once again, thank you all for your commitment and support.
再一次感谢你的承诺及支持。
• Thanks for your input/clarification/message.
谢谢您的投入/澄清/信息。
• Please convey my thanks to all the staff involved, they certainly did an excellent job.
请表达我的谢意给有关的同仁,他们真的干得很好。
[结尾客套]:
• Please let me know if there’s anything I can do to help.
请让我知道任何我可以帮得上忙的地方。
• If there’s anything else I can do for you on/regarding this matter. Please feel free to contact me at any time.
对于这件事,如果还有任何我能帮得上忙的地方,请不要客气,随时与我联络。
• If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me. Looking forward to receiving your comments in due course.
期待在预定的时间内收到您的反馈。
• For any comments/suggestions, please contact [person] at [number].
有任何的建议,请致电【电话号码】联络【联系人】。
怎么样?看完是不是觉得一封邮件也不是随便写写的?当然如果是写给关系密切的家人或者朋友,这些条条框框大可不必太在意。但是在正式场合,一封格式合理,语气恰当的邮件可以给收件人良好的第一印象。以前有句老话说字如其人,今天我们要说,邮件识人。以后踏入职场,写邮件的能力真的是必备项目哦!
墨尔本的烤鸭们请联系无忧小雅哥(mr_51ielts)哦~
悉尼的烤鸭们可以直接联系悉尼雅思姐(mrs_51ielts)咨询报名哦~