近期,2018年度英国皇家经济学会“Winners of the young economist ”写作竞赛获奖得主公布,引起国内外经济学术界的极大关注!
这个英国最大的经济写作竞赛之一的选手都是什么水平?
1300名参赛者中脱颖而出的综合类第一名到底优秀在哪?
奖项分成五个大类,获奖人数40多人,来自英国各地的不同中学。Best overall essay也就是综合写作第一名,只有一篇,作者Dan Gilbey。据说此次是评委不具名评选,参考标准包括原创性、写作质量、经济内容、经济论述质量和力度。
想知道获奖的文章里都说了什么?
结构和内容为什么突出?
文中涉及哪些经济学常考的知识点?以及应该如何解答?
这样优秀的获奖文章考试中我们该如何借鉴?
今天,CA的A-level经济老师张祎 Ivy老师将会大家详细分析这篇-全球塑料污染问题的解决办法获奖文章,精彩程度绝对超出你的想象!
获奖经济文章来源:
以下例文摘自The Royal Economic Society -Winners of the young economist of the year 2018- Best overall essay
Dan Gilbey – Haberdashers Askes Boys School
http://www.res.org.uk/view/essayEduTraining.html
获奖文章原文
RES Essay Competition Dan Gilbey
Does economics have the answer for the global problem of plastics pollution?
Part I – Does Economics have the Solution to the Global Problem of Plastics Pollution?
To best answer this question, we must, perhaps, look at possible answers under the following criteria:
1. Can the policy be implemented on a global scale?
2. Does the policy only reduce future consumption, without reversing the effects of past and present consumption, and vice versa?
3. How sustainable is the solution, and does it cause unwanted and unintended negative consequences?
In its most basic form, the problem is external costs(1). We can internalise these by appealing to people’s sentiments, or, as this essay will focus on, appealing to pockets and using price systems to influence market signals. Coase argued that market failures(2) occur because of a lack of sufficient property rights and high transaction costs, which would otherwise lead to a ‘fair’ allocation of resources (Coase, 1960). If we can establish comprehensive property rights in transactions, and reduce transaction costs, we can eliminate the market failure as economic agents will interact with each other to yield a socially optimal level of consumption and production. This is already being used in the form of tradeable permits(1),such as the EU Emission Trading Scheme. A central authority determines the ‘safe’ maximum level of pollution, issuing permits which limit the amount of pollution that can be produced in an area. Though only currently being used for emissions pollution, such as SO2, a similar system could be established for plastics. Permits force those involved in the transaction to ‘internalise’ the external cost of pollution. Maximising the effect of this solution, requires finding the major sources of plastic pollution. These are:
▼ Fishing equipment (Hammer, Kraak and Parsons, 2012) and,
▼Single-use plastic packaging and bags (Barnes et al., 2009). Knowing this, it is possible to assign tradeable plastic permits to three major groups:
▼Firms who produce plastic goods and/or use them in their production process, e.g. requiring that firms declare the amount of plastic entering their factories.
▼Consumers who buy products which contain plastic in some form, e.g. issuing permits required to be used when buying products with plastic and tracking the total weight of plastic bought over a given time period.
▼ Commercial fishermen who use plastic equipment e.g. requiring a card which debits plastic usage credits when they buy plastic fishing equipment This would mean that a controlled amount of plastic is both produced and consumed, at a minimal cost to society – this is because permits are: • sold by those who get the least value from them, as using little plastic has a relatively low opportunity cost, and • bought by those who value them the most, reducing the opportunity cost involved in limiting their usage or production of it. Moreover, permits could be issued on a global scale, by an international organisation, such as the UN. Not only do permits directly limit pollution, but they cause economic agents to be more careful in choosing and reusing what they buy. Tradeable permits are sustainable, take direct action against the problem and deliver one solution, sourced in economic theory, to solve the global problem of plastics pollution. A benefit of tradable permits is that their effectiveness has already been proven. Taking Chile as one example of a country which implemented the scheme in 1992 to cut emissions, we can see that from 1997 to 2005, aggregate emissions (kg/day) fell from 2544.79 to 688.51 (Coria and Sterner, 2009). While their use has mainly been focussed on emissions, their success supports implementing them for plastic as well. The key weakness with tradable permits under the original criteria is that they only help reduce future pollution but do nothing to reverse the effects of past pollution.
Alternatively, we could find another solution by using Pigou’s explanation of the problem of externalities. Because external effects are not accounted for in production costs or individual utility functions, they are also not subsequently reflected in product pricing (Pigou, 1933), meaning plastics are too cheap both to make and buy, therefore becoming both over-produced and over-consumed. We could, therefore, consider imposing Pigouvian taxes on plastics. Not only would these reduce the supply of plastics as their production costs become higher, but it would also reduce the quantity of plastics demanded, as consumers move away from pricier plastic-heavy products, e.g. in the packaging. Hence, taxes(2) are a cost-effective way of reducing the quantity of plastics entering the environment. There is, however, a case against the use of taxes to discourage consumption and production of a certain good. In the case of cigarettes, a recent study has suggested that a 100% tax would be needed in order to reduce adult smoking by just 5% (Callison and Kaestner, 2013), indicating that taxes are not always efficient at ensuring an outcome, as they rely on many other factors. The success of a tax specifically on plastic depends on whether the tax makes plastic more expensive than alternatives (which may be difficult given how cheap it currently is) as well as the demand-price elasticity of the product.
A similar policy would simply be to introduce a surcharge(3) on plastic goods (Nilsen, 2010). This idea comes from simple demand economics; increase the price of a good, demand will fall. Additionally, because retailers often give the money to charity, the higher price of the product will not incentivise higher supply, because the retailers are not using the bags to seek profit-maximisation, as neo-classical economics would assume. The model of the supply-curve would no longer function, rather we would just see a horizontal supply curve. Five years after China’s introduction of a surcharge on ultra-thin plastic bags in 2005, it was found that there had already been a reduction of plastic bags used by 67,000,000,000. It is too early to judge the long-term impact of the policy. There is a chance that, in time, the extra cost will be absorbed by consumers, impacting the sustainability of the policy.
Ideas from behavioural economics may solve the problem, specifically that people are averse to losses(4) (Kahneman and Tversky, 1979). Introducing a loss to people who do not recycle, could dramatically increase recycling. If recycling units were put in building entrances around major cities, and in stores, which give a small percentage of the original price of the product back to the consumer if they put their old plastic bottles in the unit, we could incentivise the recycling of plastics. Introducing a private cost to those who do not recycle their plastics, creates a loss of not recycling. Importantly, the money returned must exceed the opportunity cost of collecting it. In Germany this is being used for plastic bottles where 90% are recycled, compared to 57% of plastic bottles in the UK. Through the use of the UN to implement such a strategy on a global scale could be an effective way of combatting the plastic problem.
Part II: What can we therefore conclude?
Taxes and charges on plastics can be effective, but really only in the short-run, as over time, people absorb this extra price. These leaves tradable permits and cash-back systems as two potential solutions to plastic pollution.
▼Looking at the global nature of the policies, cash-back systems require investment into the infrastructure to allow the systems to be put in. Such an investment may not be the most efficient use of money in developing nations, where capital is scarce. With tradable permits, while it can be implemented on a global scale, the bigger question is whether it can be enforced. There are too many companies for all of them to report to the UN, hence national governments must pay a role in moderating and enforcing the permits, something very difficult to do in a developing nation where corruption may be rife.
▼With the temporal scale of the solution, tradable permits are an efficient way of reducing future consumption but do nothing to reverse the effects of previous pollution. While cash-back systems do not necessarily clear up landfill sites, they can impact waste in people’s homes otherwise bound for landfill.
▼Tradable permits have low implementation and enforcement costs meaning that government failure is less likely to occur. Cash-back systems are unlikely to deliver a complete change in cultural attitudes to recycling. However, the maintenance costs of this system are minimal, even if the setup costs are large, supporting sustainability over long periods. One weakness with the system is that if it were to be removed, the effect on recycling in the future is likely to reverse; if people no longer get money back for recycling, they are unlikely to still recycle. Conversely, with tradable permits, the process of not producing or using much plastic among economic agents becomes habitual. Despite their flaws, a combination of the cash-back and tradable permit systems would be an effective economic solution to plastic pollution. Solutions from economic theory which reduce future plastic production and consumption are available to provide part of the solution to the global problem of plastics pollution.
文章解析
这篇获奖作文是非常标准的学术派经济作文的写作方法。文章的Part I部分分析塑料污染的原因external costs(1),以及会出现的问题market failures(2),并提出4个解决方法tradeable permits(1),taxes(2),surcharge(3),averse to losses(4) 即cash-back,每一个解决方法都给出充分的分析,这个方法是如何解决market failure问题的,最后在文章的Part II 部分对这4个方法进行了evaluation,这4个方法是在短期有效还是长期有效,以及这四个方法的优点和缺陷。
A-level考点解读
这篇文章是market failure中externality的考点,写作手法也非常值得我们借鉴,对我们的学习有很大参考意义,下面详细解读文章涉及到的A-level经济考点:
▼Market failure exists whenever a free market, left to its own devices and totally free from any form of government interventions, fails to make the optimum use of scare resources.
▼The causes of market failure:Externalities,Merit goods and demerit goods,Public goods and quasi-public goods,Adverse selection or moral hazard,Monopolistic elements,Distribution of income and wealth
▼If someone else not party to the economic decision is affected by that decision. This is known as externality
Third party refers to someone not directly involved in the decision making.
▼Negative externality
Examples of negative externality from production:
The environment is damaged by the waste gas from the production of a firm which does not compensate for its pollution.
Noise pollution from aircraft taking off and landing at a nearby airport.
Liquor stores are more likely to be open late into the night than other stores, and may result in increased noise levels which harm property values in the community.
Examples of negative externality from consumption
Smokers ignore the impact of “passive smoking” on non-smokers.Second-hand smoke increases the risk of heart disease.
When car owners use roads, they impose congestion on all other users.
Another way of understanding externality is to define an externality as any divergence between private and social costs or benefits.
Private costs are those costs involved in an action that accrue to the decision-maker.
Social costs are all the related costs associated with that action.
Social costs are the costs not just to the individual which creates the costs, but to the rest of society as well. It therefore includes all private costs, but may also include other costs.
External costs are differences between private costs and social costs.
Social cost= private cost + external cost
Diagram
▼Positive externality
Examples of positive externality from production:
The production of cars in an area, creating employment, will benefit the shops, places of entertainment
Education and training
Examples of positive externality from consumption:
An individual planting an attractive garden in front of his or her house may provide benefits to others living in the area, (and even financial benefits in the form of increased property values for all property owners).
Immunization,Improved health provision and health care creates a better quality of life and higher living standards
Museum: Provide interest in cultural heritage,Increase tourism, Create employment in areas other than the museum
Another way of understanding externality is to define an externality as any divergence between private and social costs or benefits.
l Private costs are those costs involved in an action that accrue to the decision-maker.
l Social costs are all the related costs associated with that action.
Social costs are the costs not just to the individual which creates the costs, but to the rest of society as well. It therefore includes all private costs, but may also include other costs.
l External costs are differences between private costs and social costs.
Social cost= private cost + external cost
Diagram
对于externality的解决方法,文章中给出了非常优秀的解析:
tradeable permits(1),taxes(2),surcharge(3),averse to losses(4) 即cash-back,同学们可以学起来,认真拜读这篇获奖文章。
写作方法借鉴
以下考试题虽然是各个考试局的题目,但是都可以套用这篇文章的写作方法(以externality为例)即:
第一段introduction:[knowledge]知识点解读(即externlity概念)+[Analysis]分析问题(即externality导致的问题)+[Application]应用(即举例子)
第二段解决方法policy(1):[Knowledge]说明解决方法是什么. [Analysis]分析这个方法是如何解决问题的[Application]应用(即举个例子)
第三 四 …… 段解决方法policy(2)(3)…… 写作方法同(1)
第n段 分析或者讨论:[Evaluation]常用分析方法是:1. 这些policy多大程度上可以解决这个问题; 2. 什么条件下这些policy不适用;3. Short-run long-run效果会不会不一样 ……
历年相关真题
CIE S16/42
2 ‘Government economic policy is based on the idea that people cannot be trusted to choose what is good for them but instead sometimes choose things that are harmful to themselves or detrimental to the environment (or both). T
herefore a free market cannot allocate resources efficiently.’ Do you support this argument? [25]
EDEXCEL WEC01_01_que_20180515
DATA:Extract 2 Orange production damages the environment
To grow orange trees most farmers use chemical fertilisers which have contributedto soil erosion and polluted the water supply. Orange trees also require 62.7 litres ofwater to grow one orange. This compares to 15 litres for one tomato and 1.8 litres forone strawberry. In California the use of so much water in orange production during 5 a four-year drought led to a deterioration in soil quality.
(d) With reference to Extract 2, evaluate the external costs associated with the production of oranges. Illustrate your answer with an externalities diagram. [14]
AQA-ECON2-QP-JAN12
DATA:Extract C: Should we charge students higher fees for attending university?
The debate is about more than paying for university education. It centres on the 15 nature of the society in which we want to live. Some economists argue that educationis a service which is essential to any society which claims to be civilised. They alsobelieve that education is a service which markets tend to under-provide.
这些真题有些还需要别的知识点做补充才能拿到一个非常优秀的分数,不过同学们可以根据自己所在考试局思考一下这些题目应该如何解答~
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