英国大学学院招生服务中心(UCAS)负责人表示:学生在个人陈述中所用的“陈词滥调”会损害其未来的职业发展。
Ucas数据显示:“从小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been、、、)是去年申请者最常用的开头。
70万学生中有超过1,779名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)结尾。
我们梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子,各位准备写申请文书的同学可要留心哟!
1、“自打记事起,我就…”(For as long as I can remember I have...)
2、“我申请这个课程是因为…”(I am applying for this course because...)
3、“我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in...)
4、“在我一生当中,我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)
5、“回顾我的教育经历,我…”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)
6、“护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的…”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)
7、“在学术上,我一直是…”(Academically, I have always been...)
8、“我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)
9、“我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about...)
10、“教育是充满力量的武器,你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world、)
Ucas首席执行官Mary Curnock Cook表示,个人陈述一定要个人化。“学会介绍自己在求职面试中是一项很重要的技能,用那些陈词滥调无法让你的才能凸显。”
内容编辑自英国《电讯报》
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