【最佳写作结构】最全!雅思7分写作的最佳结构!

2016年09月16日 无忧小雅哥



雅思写作的那些结构

有些学生词句能力并不弱,但为何总是考不到7?原因何在? 也许,该思索一下你的文章是否像那些范文一样条理清晰,结构严谨,逻辑严密?

要想在雅思作文中拿高分, 考生一定要熟悉作文的结构, 在背范文时也要注意范文是怎么安排段落的, 段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的等等。
类型一:
你同意还是不同意
这类文章大致的问法有:
Do you agree or disagree? /To what extent do you agree or disagree? / what's your opinion?
本类型最佳文章结构:
Introduction = paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.
*Please do not write any unnecessary sentence, e.g. with the development of modern technologies...

例题: 《剑桥9》 Test 2 Task 2 Page 54
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?


例文: Page 165
It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programs. (复述题目, 介绍背景) Most of the colleges are already providing opportunities to gain work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion, sending students to work in community services is a good idea as it can provide them with many lots of valuable skills. (给出自己观点, 观点清晰明确与否是达到7分的必要条件.)

Body Paragraph = topic sentence + explanation
Paragraph 1 = the point you do not agree (Against) 
第一段写你所不同意的所要反驳的观点.

Paragraph 2 = the point you agree (For)
第二段写你所支持的观点.

*Please write your opinion as FIRST sentence of the paragraph.

如果你是写一边倒的文章, 每一段只能描述一个观点理由.
For instance, you totally disagree with the point, it should be:

  • Introduction 段I completely disagree with this point of view because.... 
  • Body paragraph 1The first reason is… 
  • Body paragraph 2The second one is… 

Conclusion = Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above

写完所有的Body Paragraph,conclusion不能不写。Conclusion不需要太过复杂和繁琐,只需要有一种新的表达方式来复述题目,并且总结一下自己写得观点就已经足够了。
类型二:
Discuss Both views
这类文章一般都会这样问: Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

本类型最佳文章结构:
Introduction= paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.

Body=topic sentence + explanation

一定一定一定要讨论两个观点,两个观点都要提到,不然Task Response会扣分,会偏题。因为题目的要求是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion”

Paragraph 1 = the point you do not agree (Against)
Paragraph 2 = the point you agree (For)

Conclusion=Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above
类型三:
Reason & Solution
这类文章一般考题为: What’s the causes and effect of this issue? /why is this case?And what solutions can be done? Should anything be done to solve this problem?

本类型最佳文章结构:
Introduction= paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.
不管哪一种类型的文章,introduction的写法都是大同小异的。引出题目背景,表达自己观点,2-3句话就已足够。

Body paragraph =Reason 1 + explanation + Reason 2 + explanation
此类文章可以在一段内写2-3个可能造成这个现象的理由,也可以把理由分开成几段来写,比如:
  • Body paragraph 1 =Reason 1 + explanation 
  • Body paragraph 2 =Reason 2 + explanation

写完Reason之后,文章要求写相应的影响或者解决方法,这个时候可以用一段或者分段来写2-3个影响或解决办法。

Conclusion = Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above and possible solutions or effect.

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