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Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人建议对于报纸和电视上犯罪细节的报道应该加以限制，你在多大程度上同意这个观点?

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支持对于犯罪细节报道的审查，但是对于如何预防犯罪和加强自我保护应该宣传。

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一方面，为何应该限制对于犯罪细节的报道：

-过度犯罪细节的报道会给一些青少年非常负面的影响，他们心智不成熟，很容易去模仿一些坏的行为，走上犯罪之路。

-过度犯罪细节的报道会提高犯罪率，导致社会的不稳定。一些人从犯罪细节的报道中学习到了犯罪的方法，破案的细节，尤其是一些刑事犯罪，因此，犯罪细节的报道某种程度上起到教唆犯罪的作用。

另一方面，为何不该限制对于犯罪细节的报道：

因为对于犯罪细节的报道的初衷是提醒公众，是关于如何预防犯罪，教育公众加强自我保护，有报道的必要。人们从别的受害者的经历中，能够了解到一些犯罪手法，例如新型的网络犯罪，手机诈骗，由此提高警惕，避免类似遭遇。

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【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 写作立场

Currently, people are often exposed to detailed depictions of various anti-social offences in newspapers or televisions, which has become a sort of feature of commercialized mass media. There is no consensus among people as to whether detailed descriptions of crimes should be strictly censored.

Personally speaking, the coverage of violations should be strictly controlled whereas the ways of preventing some crimes should be introduced.

【二段】为何应该限制对于犯罪细节的报道

Granted, convincing arguments can be explored to justify the idea of implementing strict control on the descriptions of crimes. For one thing, those criminal descriptions exert great negative impacts on the teenagers. So immature and curious are many youngsters that they tend to blindly duplicate those crimes they see on media, which may lead to juvenile delinquency. For another, as for many potential offenders, some skills of committing crimes could be learned from the introduction of crimes. Specifically, some frequent violators have access to criminal skills and even the police’s detective methods from television programs and newspapers’ stories about crimes.

【三段】为何不该限制对于犯罪细节的报道：

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