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2017年04月27日 无忧小雅哥



2017.04.22 A类Task 2 范文

Some people think that people who decide on a career early and keep to the same job are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 


【一篇很“规范”的关于工作职业的问题,也是一个常见的问题类型,最近雅思的题目真的是不难,大家要抓紧机会啦!问你是否同意不常换工作的人比经常跳槽的人更容易获得工作上的满足感。】



Some people believe that people who make an early career decision and keep the same job are more likely to get a satisfying professional life than those who often change jobs. I personally, disagree with this perception

【其实很简单,一句复述题目的句子+自己的观点,就能构成一个高分的introduction。】


It could be true that people who realise what they want early and carry on in the job, end up being absolutely satisfied. But, it is possible that people are not really content and get bored with the monotonous career which in turn, may result in more stress. Many people need change in their work life and a regular move in career paths might be an exciting experience for them.


In today’s ever-changing times, most people prefer to work in fields that are close to their heart. Frequently changing jobs may be a way of finding the field that resonates with a person’s skills and passion. For instance, a person might shift from an accounting job to client advisory if he finds a people skills oriented field more stimulating than a desk job. It is similar for entrepreneurs who might try different businesses before sticking to the right one.  

【用两段来证明作者本人并不同意题目中的观点,一直做同一份工作的人可能会对工作产生疲倦感,从而加大压力,换工作也许是一种exciting的经历;同时,作者还认为频繁的换工作可以帮助人们找到他们最适合的工作领域,从而在工作上获得更多的满足感。】


In conclusion, I do not believe that people who decide on a career path early and stay on it are more likely to gain job satisfaction than those who frequently change jobs. There may be times when people find their work to be mundane or when they are seeking their ‘right fit’, where frequent change in jobs would mean greater pleasure. Finding the passion rather than making an early decision of a career path, in my opinion, means greater likelihood of career life satisfaction. 


Word Count: 270

【这篇文章的篇幅正正好好,大家考试的时候写到这样的长度就足够了。Task 2的要求是要写250字,不能少于250字,大致把字数保持在270左右是最佳的。最好不要写的超过300字,一是时间可能不够,二是字数会稍显偏多,不利于得分。】



[Key Vocabulary]

Perception: n. 知觉,【生理】感觉,看法,洞察力

Monotonous: adj. 单调的,千篇一律的,枯燥的

Get bored with: 对…感到疲倦

Career path: 职业道路,生涯路径

Ever-changing:  adj. 千变万化的,变化莫测的

Resonate: Vt. 共鸣,产生共鸣

Shift from: 从…移开,从…转移

Entrepreneurs: /,ɔntrəprə'nə:/;企业家,实业家

Mundane: adj. 世俗的,平凡的,平淡的

Likelihood: n. 可能性,可能


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