9分范文—从三大要素看满分作文

2015年11月04日 无忧小雅哥




2015.10.31 A类大作文范文


Some people say that everyone can create art, but others think only those who are talented or have special skills can create art. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【如果是小雅哥当场看到考卷上这题目,估计直接蒙掉,然后大概连转身就走的心都有了… 关于Arts的题目,有些时候是真的挺考验烤鸭们的思维&词句能力~ 那么这样一个较难的题目,如何要写好一篇9分的文章呢?三大要素:结构清晰,逻辑顺畅,例子生动具体,用词语法准确无误。


Art has been an essential means of portraying creativity throughout human history, but the definition of art has been debated, raising questions about who can truly create art, only those with talent or simply anyone. Personally, I agree with the idea that anyone can create art, as people can determine their own preferences on artistic value.


On one hand, people won’t pay admission or wait in queues to see just anything. Public consensus can usually determine what is considered special, as many will admire the work of a talented artist. This is why paintings like the Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci and Starry Nights by Van Gogh are considered priceless and exhibited on permanent display for the public, only talented people can create works so widely admired.


Despite popular taste, what constitutes art can be a very personal opinion. While many agree on the masterpieces, individuals still have their personal taste. Some people prefer abstract works while others value realism; some people love classical music, while others like hip hop. As the popular saying goes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and anyone can decide on their own what constitutes art.


In my view, personal preference means anyone can in fact create art. This can be illustrated by drawings hung on a family refrigerator, where parents adore the works of their children, regardless of how much talent was required to make them. My favourite teacup was decorated by my niece and nephew decorated, and that is why I value it as a masterpiece.


In conclusion, I believe anyone can create art, but the value associated with it can be determined on a personal and public scale.


279 words – 40 minutes


这篇9分的满分文章,写的的确是不错,那么广大烤鸭们能从中学到什么呢?

首先,是小雅哥给大家Underline的Topic-related Vocabulary. 相信大家都知道creativity, 那么creativity可以搭配Portray;taste可以用popular 或者personal来形容;abstract works的 “反面可以用realism,并且用value realism来paraphrase love/like/prefer realism. 诸如此类的好词好句,大家若能有毅力的积累、消化,那么只要在文章中用上那么几个,用的准确,那么你的LR就棒棒哒!

红色highlight的部分,是些不错的sentence structure. 大家以后写Task 2,完全可以用this can be illustrated by…这类句子结构来写。句子的多样性,让你的LR&GRA分数都提升一个等次哦!~


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