手把手教你如何写好漂亮的长难句！仅仅7步！,无忧小雅哥微信公众号文章

如何写出漂亮的error-free长句

相信每一位考生都想要写出漂亮的长句，也最好这些句子都没有任何语法错误。不会被扣分。

今天无忧小雅哥和悉尼雅思姐教给大家一个办法，用七个步骤，写出一句漂亮的复杂句。相信这个小技巧，会对正在备考雅思考试写作的同学们有所帮助！

大家一般都能写出一个非常简单，只有主谓结构的短句：

Japanese Tourists + travel abroad = Japanese tourists who travelled abroad.

那么要描述成一个数据，就可以加上the amount, the number, the percentage, the rate等等等等~
例如：The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

第二步，在简单句的基础上，添加相关的数据。
即：The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

第三步，也很简单，只要在之前的基础上，加上这个数据的相应时间(ifapplicable)：
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 millionto 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

现在只是简单的三步，句子已经变的很长了哦！是不是已经和平时写的那些复杂句差不多了呢？加油加油，还有四步，来看看他纠结会 “长”成什么样。

第四步：之前给出的数据，是正正好好的？是EXACTLY的吗？如果不是的话，我们就来稍稍描述一下：
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and1995.

第五步：适当的添加一个副词Addan adverb
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

这一类的副词其实很多，不同的副词代表不同的程度。大家可以根据图表的实际情况来选择哦！

常用的有：

Dramatically, sharply, gradually, significantly, slowly, suddenly, considerably, noticeably, remarkably, rapidly, steadily, moderately, slightly, mildly, moderately 等等等等~

至于分组分类嘛，大家请自行努力解决！不要偷懒哦！

现在这句话是不是已经看上去很圆满很长了？不急不急，我们还可以继续扩句哦！怎么扩？

第六步：以名词结构来复述一遍(这里请仔细看)：
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramaticallyfrom just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

什么？还能继续扩？这词的扩句，严格意义上来说，是换个方式写句子：

第七步：尝试换个方式来写这句句子：
　　改写成：
There was a dramatic increase in thenumber of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from justunder 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10million in 10 years.