Q:In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. Paper, glass, cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

Most of garbage, such as paper or cans, are① not being recycled in most of nations② around the world. This essay discusses③ why this is happening and explores measures which can address④ the problem.

[①: are ➡️ has not been properly recycled; ②: most of nations ➡️ quite a few nations (=most) nations; ③: discuss ➡️ will discuss; ④: which can address ➡️ that can be taken to tackle]

There are several reasons that waste① are been neglected② for recycling. The primary reason is that a considerable number of citizens have no consciousness③ of rubbish recycling. For instance, many residents in developing countries dispose④ the empty bottles or used plastic food containers as trash⑤ due to the lack of awareness in separating recyclable waste from general waste✰. The second reason is that it is difficult for household to find extra space to store those reusable materials, especially for those who live in small apartment with limited space, which impedes the likelihood for⑥ recycling✰. 

[①: waste is an uncountable noun when it refers to material that has been used and also no longer wanted; ②: neglected ➡️ re-word it; ③: have no consciousness ➡️ lack the awareness; ④: dispose ➡️ throw away; ⑤: as trash ➡️ along with other general household garbage all together; ⑥: for ➡️ of]

✰: I would recommend you to give a bit further explanation that why people in the developing countries lack this awareness. For example, why don’t we recycle used plastic containers so that we can reuse it is simply because they are cheap and easy to obtain.

✰: I don’t really catch the second reason. Why we need to store those waste materials??? The task is about recycling – if you recycle things that have been already used, such as bottles or sheets of paper, you process them so that they can be used again.

To tackle this problem, both governments and individuals are required to be participants. The most effective ways is that governments can introduce regulations which demands① citizens to process recycling② by rubbish classification③. Take Australia for example, every Australian household are④ responsible to classify⑤ the part of rubbish⑥, such as glass, cardboard and recyclable plastics, into recycling, which guarantees the maximum level of recycling. Secondly, environmentalists⑦ can organise campaigns to introduce⑧ the merits of recycling as saving the nature⑨ and creating a low-carbon lifestyle. Therefore⑩, booting the awareness of rubbish recycling in individuals. 

[①: demands: subject-verb agreement error; ②: process recycling ➡️ recycle; ③: rubbish classification ➡️ fining those who do not recycle; ④: subject-verb agreement error; ⑤: classify ➡️ recycle/separate; classify the part of the rubbish means differently and weirdly; ⑥: the part of rubbish ➡️ garbage; ⑦: they are not individuals; ⑧introduce  publicize; ⑨:saving the nature ➡️ preserving/protecting environment; ⑩: we use ‘therefore’ to draw a conclusion. (Therefore, more waste materials can be recycled.)]

In conclusion, most of waste are wasted① because of people’s ignorance and the dilemma② during storing. However, if governments regulate individuals to pay attention to recycling, together with the appeal③ from environmentalists, the tremendous quantity of waste can be properly recycled.

[ ①: ??? What does it mean? ; ②: what is the dilemma? ③: ???Wrong choice of word. ]